Production: Production company: Co-Producer: Director: Joel Bailey Precious Adeniyi Adam Belhalt 1 st AD: Crew Call: Estimated wrap: Shooting Date: 19/09/17 *** See movement order 1 and attached map *** Location: Leyton sixth form Location contact: *** NO SMOKING ON ANY SET *** SET *SCENES PAGES CAST Nos LOCATION The school entrance 1 1 Leyton sixth form Gym 2 2 Leyton sixth form The back of the school 3 3 Leyton sixth form NO. ARTISTE CALL TIME MAKE-UP REMARKS ...
This is a really good start Precious. You are strong on editing and you mainly use media language well. Clarify eye line shot in the section on camera. You could have written in more detail about mise en scene- there is lots to say on locations, props and costume. You could also elaborate on sound. Add stills throughout to illustrate. Vanessa / Gabrielle
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